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Writing of the Body: Metaphor Making is Food for the Soul — 10 Comments

  1. Thank you Sheila for this prompt. Here is what I wrote in my morning pages.
    I always call Ted my rock but thee are times when he’s more like immovable concrete and I can’t dissuade him whatever I do. He’s strong in many ways but then his heart is not so strong and he takes a whole shelf of pills for his flutter and a blockage along with two blood thinners. There’s a frailty in him I don’t want to see but then his blue eyes look at me and I just melt a bit.

    • I think you have some good images here to use for a longer piece of writing: the blue eyes, heart not as strong as it was are especially poignant to read. You might try comparing his heart the way it is working now to something inanimate and the blue eyes to something they have always been. It will be a beautiful personal essay.

  2. Can’t wait to try these. I often think of a metaphor for a part of my body but then don’t know how to take it further. This helps! I also love the way you’ve suggested using this approach to help express our concerns about the impact of the horror show currently going on in Washington.

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