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Ekphrastic Poetry — 2 Comments

  1. Oh, how close you are to a poem! Try reading your wonderful prose response and thinking poetry:

    The King of my Crete Won’t Let Me Leave

    There is no wingmaker in my world,
    so I have no waxwings. But if I did,
    I think I might try to fly by night,
    in the moonlight…no drowning, no melting…
    important because I’m even less
    obedient than Icarus.

    Will I “take my turn” on a slow Sunday
    afternoon when the sky is gray and raining
    contemplative thoughts down the glass
    sheeting of my window panes?

    You’ve got the bug!!!!!

  2. Ekphrastic poems are new to me, like poetry thinking out loud and commenting. My mind said, ugh, think I’ll skip this, and then said, well, Sheila is gently nudging. Cupa in my hand with cream and sugar, off I went, surfing the sites and wonder of wonders, actually got captured, a little bit. Nude Descending a Staircase bit me hard, though didn’t catch the bug, but fell in love with nearly all the phrases. House by the Railroad tagged me with “he is a last afternoon shadow”…been there, done that. Musee des Beaux Arts-Auden kept me there for 20 minutes. Robert Frost’s comment on the side bar “Life goes on”…Obla di Obla da got to me more than the poem itself, though it drew me back to Landscape with the Fall of Icarus:” a splash quite unnoticed~Icarus drowning”. It did stimulate this thought: The King of my Crete won’t let me leave either, and there is no wingmaker in my world, so I have no waxwings. But if I did, I think I might try to fly by night, in the moonlight…no drowning, no melting…important because I’m even less obedient than Icarus. Will I “take my turn” as the writer suggests? Maybe, on a slow Sunday afternoon when the sky is gray and raining contemplative thoughts down the glass sheeting of my window panes. But not today. Today the sun is shining!

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