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Hey, Monkey Mind — 11 Comments

    • hi Sheila,
      Having just moved from my home of over four decades to another state – and community – I resonated so much with your recent column – indeed, I have had ‘monkey mind’ as I, too, have sorted through so many “books, trinkets, pieces of furniture…” of which some have been kept and some discarded, and some are still in limbo, looking for their new permanent residence (as am I, still feeling new here). It helped me to think about my writing in that way – my monkey mind wanting to alight upon so many objects/phrases/memories that might enlighten me – and hopefully a reader – to what I’ve learned or hope to learn from my life. I’m learning to ‘start where I am’ — not try to find the ‘right place’ to start, but to fix myself in where I am right now, and the measure of my life will become, perhaps, more visible because I’ve given myself a chance to look around.

      • Thanks, Barbara, for writing out your experience of the move-induced monkey mind state and your recognition that among the tangible stuff of our lives reside objects that can spark our writing. And sometimes, after we have written the writing replaces the need to hang on to the stuff because it resides now in the vessel of our writing.

  1. Sheila, beautifully written and spoken, if you will, as I hear your voice, too,
    first talking to yourself, then to me (& WIR writers) gently nudging us on.
    How many of those artifacts, trinkets, special books, broad landscapes
    might lead to writing a poem, story, or essay? What will make you sing
    while you are at work (not HI-HO, but arrgghhhh) organizing? As always, nancy

    • Thank you, Nancy. The essay was born out of my desire to write but thinking I couldn’t because my head was full of literal stuff from having moved. And then I just started writing to find out what I had to say. I think that is the best way to start. The trick is in that “whittling” I wrote about. Not everything we put on the page leads to the path the writing wants to take and not everything we need to put down has found its way into the writing. So we must look deeply into the writing, listen to what first readers respond with, and whittle and add (that whittling makes room for additions that are on the essay’s true path), perhaps whittle and add again, read and reread! Ah, how writing is a process.

      • Sheila,
        I love how you describe this here to Nancy. The words, like possessions and memories when we move, are whittled down to fit the space we have and the new spaces we create for them!
        Amy

  2. I am glad this resonated. Yes, write where you are even if only for 10 minutes. It will become twenty minutes and then even more! Even just a series of ten-minute writes from where you are restarts the writing habit,

  3. Sheila, I can relate to this often, not even having to move. Moving can be a shift in circumstance, inner or outer. Thanks for the reminder to write where you are. Thank you!

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