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Celebrate National Poetry Month by Writing Poems! Yes, Even If You Think You Can’t! — 3 Comments

  1. Hi Cyndi,
    YOur list seems a poem in itself–it is evoking the opportunity to make close observations and then for me number 10 speaks directly to the transitory nature of life. Nice work! You might give it a title like “What I Didn’t Notice”.

  2. Thank you for this article, Sheila. I enjoyed reading the example poems from the links you provided. And I like the idea of listing images and trusting them to go somewhere.

    Here is my list:

    7 or more things I see in my backyard that someone else looking might not notice:

    1. the tiny black ant crawling up the step and being blown off by the gusty wind and trying again and again to climb that step
    2. the box elder bugs in the dry, brown leaves
    3. the stinky, sticky, yellow sheaths dispersed on the grass from the Fremont cottonwood tree
    4. the dead roses branches among the greening ones
    5. the cobwebs in the corners of the patio step and foundation of the house, cover in straw-colored grass clippings
    6. cigarette ashes on the rocks
    7. the dry leaf caught in the chain-link fence at the north-east corner of the yard that scraps against the metal when the wind blows
    8. grass sprouts at the bases of some of the rose bushes
    9. a floribunda rose bush is growing in with a hybrid tea rose bush
    10. that the yellow tickseed isn’t growing back

    I look forward to your response.
    Cyndi

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