Tender is the Harvest, A Winning Essay by Laurie McConnachie

Our contest judge Holly Hughes  wrote these words in choosing Laurie McConnachie’s essay as one of our three winners:

This is a deeply moving account of a daughter who lost her mother to a brain tumor when she was in her late 20s—and how she learns to move through grief and open her heart to her own young daughter. Filled with strong visual scenes and authentic dialogue that put us there beside her, both in the hospital with her mother and in the pumpkin field with her daughter, this personal essay exhibits an excellent natural sense of pacing, an effective balance of narration/description/reflection and many strong, fresh details.

The narrator’s description of carving the pumpkin with her daughter is especially powerful, given the chilling scenes in the hospital that foreshadowed it.

Thank you, Laurie, for a very moving and deeply affecting essay.

In her essay, Laurie quotes a counselor as saying that the only way out of grief is through. Laurie’s essay provides the road necessary for the journey, a road made of images of both loss and of living, a road that creates beauty from sorrow for any who must travel it.

Tender is the Harvest

by Laurie McConnachie

As we slowly make our way down the hallway, I feel her lean into me. She lists to the left inside the shapeless, faded green and white striped cotton robe that engulfs her petite frame. I can’t help but wonder how many other men and women have worn this exact same robe between hundreds of steamy sanitizing washes. What happened to those souls? What was their fate?

Deliberately, yet hesitantly, she reaches to place and ground each step. Her feet are tucked inside the navy velveteen slippers from home that are used to padding along on cushioned carpet. The pale gray linoleum floors have been mopped to a shine and smell of pungent disinfectant. Florescent lights reflect off bright white walls that feel like they are closing in on us. They sting my reddened eyes, making me want to shut them completely.

We hear moans and calls from patients as we pass their rooms. I glance in open doors. Some look caught in uncomfortable slumber, monitors beeping, TV’s droning. I see IV’s and tangles of tubes. Some pump saline and drugs or liquid food into bodies. Others take out the flow of acrid smelling fluids, as they drip into clear hanging bags clipped onto the sides of beds.

Next to the nurses’ station, an icy metal cart displays a collection of pumpkins of different sizes and shapes. “The neurosurgeons have used their scalpels to show off their carving skills,” the nurse declares with the levity of someone on the lucky side of the desk. They have sliced off the tops of the pumpkins, scraped out the slimy entrails, and cut out crude eyes, noses, and menacing smiles.

My mother stops, stares. I feel her hand tighten around my arm. Her fingernails push through my thick cabled sweater, into my skin. She looks up at me through the dullness that now clouds her gray-blue eyes. Eyes that were clear mere weeks ago. “How would you like to have your head cut open like a pumpkin?” she whispers. It is the eve of her surgery. It is Halloween. The day of the dead.

When I was in fifth grade, Mrs. Reynolds asked our class what our favorite season was. My hand was the first to fly up. “Fall!” I called out. Fall was mounds of cheerful pumpkins in huge bins greeting us at the grocery store and adorning porches. It was bright October days giving way to fresh November rains that brought out the scent of the evergreens to grace the air. Autumn meant warm knitted sweaters and woodsy smelling smoke swirling out of chimneys.

As the darkness of the days quickened, it meant more time with my mother inside our fifty’s brick rambler that sat tucked above the salty waters of Puget Sound. We would sit in the kitchen, sharing apples so fresh they had veins of juice running through them and warm oatmeal cookies straight off the sheet.

Here, at the white Formica table under the glow of the green and gold glass hanging lamp, my mother and I would sit together every day as afternoon slid into evening. With steam from dinner cooking forming on the inside of the window while heavy rains pattered and slid down the outside, we shared our lives. My mother would ask about my day, listen to my troubles and laugh at my jokes, share her own stories and wisely guide me through my homework and life.

But, life doesn’t change on a dime. It changes with a cat scan in a windowless room after your family notices you aren’t getting over what you insist is the flu. It is where the technicians inject dye into your veins, slide you into the big metal tube and scurry behind the protective wall of glass to activate the radiation emitting machine. So, they don’t get cancer. Life changes with a scan that looks inside your brain and crashes your safe little spot on the planet with its findings.

Gently, I guide her back to room 221 where my father and a nurse are waiting. The nurse holds slim silver scissors and my father holds a brown paper bag. We lift and swing my mother’s legs onto the bed. Before my mother leans back fully onto the pillow, the nurse jumps in. She starts to shear with the distracted dexterity of someone who has done this countless times. Perhaps she is wondering what groceries she will pick up for dinner after her shift, on a night my mother will have none.

The nurse’s fingers flit with quick snips across my mother’s head, from front to back, and across again. My mother’s soft brown curls fall all around her shoulders, her lap, the sheets and the floor. My father tries awkwardly to keep up with the nurse’s haphazard movements, to catch the falling swaths while keeping out of the moving path of the scissors. He is like a child cupping his hands under falling snow, racing to catch snowflakes before they melt.

When the flurry quiets, tears trace directionless paths down his cheeks as he looks at me imploringly, quietly holding the crumpled bag. My mother, silent, tilts her head downward. Tears fall off her barely lined cheeks wetting the wisps of hair that have landed on her lap. Her head suddenly bald on this freezing October night. Her crowning glory fallen all around her.

The next morning, the orderlies pull my mother on the gurney past the cart of pumpkins with their hollow eyes and empty smiles. They cart her through the wide doors to surgery. On the other side, the surgeon readies himself. He will use a saw to cut though my mother’s skull, exposing her brain which he will inhabit for the next ten and a half hours. What ghoulish monsters will he find as he attempts to trace and excise the tumor’s insidious tentacles that reach into the folds and crevices of her brain?

It is my twenty-eighth fall. I have just parted from my mother. I don’t know if this was our final good-bye. She could die in surgery. I am still becoming. Whom will I marry? What did she feel that made her decide to marry my father? What will I do with my career? How old was I when I smiled for the first time, took my first step? Will I have children? I will need her advice and help. So many unanswered questions yet to ask.

My mother survives the surgery and is wheeled back into her room. Any sparse remnants of her shorn hair are now completely shaved off. The flaps of her scalp that were peeled back to expose her skull have been stretched back together in a sharp fleshy seam that reaches across the top of her head, from one ear to the other. Small spots of blood have already seeped through and crusted around the staples. She is sleeping, wounded.

It is not the last time my mother’s head will be cut open like a pumpkin. A few months later, another surgeon will try his scalpel-wielding hand at slaying the goliath glioblastoma, the most aggressive type of brain tumor. Then, on a spectacular autumn day with leaves dancing and beckoning outside her window, her legs will buckle under her for the last time.

In the evening before Christmas, she will strain to say a barely audible, “I love you,” under the glow of the white lights on the wreath that hangs above the tall wooden dresser. It will be the last time she will ever speak. By Valentine’s Day, she will have fallen into the open-eyed stare of a coma.

For the next five months, I will turn her every two hours and tend to the web of tubes through which my father reaches his arm to wrap around her every night. I will get up from my bed in my childhood bedroom, which I left at eighteen and have now re-inhabited, to turn her body to abate bed sores. It is a constant rotation, two hours on her back, two on her right side, two on her left, repeat.

I will change the sheets on the bed with her still in it. I will use the machine to suction the phlegm from her mouth and throat that she cannot swallow or spit out. I will dump its contents several times a day into the toilet and flush it away with my dreams about how my life was going to be.

I will race in for the uncountable number of flinching, jerking seizures, never knowing if this one will cause her to die. I will stand in the dark at the doorway to listen for the sound of her breath. In the middle of a warm July night, her breath will suddenly change, start to rattle and labor. It will be unexpectedly loud and wrenching. She will look in horrific distress and then just as suddenly, it will go silent. A silence unlike any other. While all the neighbors sleep safely in their dreams.

Yes, there are reminders of my mother throughout the year. On random days, anything can trigger my grief. The path along the waterfront that we used to walk along together on breezy spring mornings. The brightly lit up boats that cruise the shore playing carols that we went to see every December from the beach, cups of hot cider warming our hands through our mittens. Frothy whitecaps on the ocean water on a stormy winter day. A sprinkling of tiny daisies in the verdant grass, Chanel Number 5. Her blue hairbrush with the white bristles entwined with strands of her thick brown hair that still sits in her bathroom drawer.

Yet, it is when the leaves begin parting from the branches and floating their way back to earth, they take my heart with them to a place as dark as the night soil upon which they land. When I see that first pumpkin of fall, I feel myself sliding into the abyss. I am back by the nurses’ station, feeling the grip of fear from my mother meshing with my own. Pumpkins, once a symbol of autumn jubilance and the warmth of home, are now a symbol of darkness and loss. And they are everywhere.

The earth keeps spinning in its orbit. The seasons circle around. I grasp at anything that might lessen the haunting. I ache to reach past the graphic flashbacks to the peace I once felt. They travel with me, hound me, wherever I go.

I sit in a circle around a table with a lighted ivory votive and box of Kleenex, with a group of grieving women on dark Monday nights. In that room, we share what torments us, whom or what we have lost and wonder alone, yet together, how we will find joy or meaning again. The counselor tells us that, “The only way out of grief is through.”

I learn to meditate, to work with my thoughts, to think of the happy times tucked in our modest house, the place I once thought so safe and impervious to suffering. I let the tears flow. I don’t try to block them. I lean into the pain, breathe, and remember what was good that I can still carry forward. It is conscious and it is effortful.

After many turns of the earth, I feel life growing inside my belly. I take long walks in woods under shimmering trees. I see the pumpkins and feel my hands touch the roundness of my belly. Now I am the mother of a little girl with soft brown curls and big blue eyes, the whites as bright as the ever-changing clouds scudding across the blue expanse.

“Mommy, I’m so excited for Halloween. Can we get a pumpkin? I can’t wait!” I see in her an innocence I have long forgotten. Her eyes are shiny and opened wide to life, the way mine used to be. Now, the blinders I wear have become as much a part of me as my arms or legs. They are my armor and unbeknownst to her, she is asking me to take them off. She is unwittingly goading me to go where my heart no longer lets me.

One misty October afternoon, I pick Keira up from school after a morning of kindergarten. On the island where we live, a small farm sits wide and serene along the road we pass along to head home. Miniature pumpkins adorn the tops of each fencepost. Down below the slope of grapevines, lies a bountiful field of bright orange spheres, their roots still reaching into the earth.

“Can we go get a pumpkin, Mommy?” She has been pleading every day and each time, I look away and say, “Not today, honey.” “But why not? Why can’t we ever go get a pumpkin?” I hear again the disappointment and feel it grate against my heart. On this day, unlike the others, something inside me guides me to turn the car around and go back.

I drive through the open wooden gates and follow the dirt road down toward the fields, brown dust stirring up around my gray car, clinging to its sides. “I can’t wait, Mommy. We are going to have so much fun!” As soon as I park, she bursts out of the car and is running toward the vast sea of pumpkins. I breathe in and force myself out.

I stand and watch as she runs, her long brown hair bouncing down the length of her small, young back. Her blue flowered dress billows in the breeze above her pink sparkly boots. “Come on, Mommy!” She calls out to me, her voice high and pure. “Look at all these pumpkins! “Aren’t they beautiful?” She dances and skips around the patch and waves me toward her, beckoning. “Mommy, bring a wagon so we can collect the pumpkins!”

“The only way out is through.” I glance toward the gate at the top of the hill and back toward this innocent girl that I have brought into the world. I throw my blinders to the dirt. I grab the rusty handle of a worn black metal wagon and head toward my daughter and the pumpkins.

“Let’s fill up the wagon,” I declare. “Really?” “Yes.” I hear myself say. She hoists in sugar pumpkins and then scurries ahead in the field until one calls to her. With a giant smile, she claims one that is half her size. It sits large and ripe in the dirt, proud and unassuming. It is symmetrical, its unblemished skin a luminous orange. Time and weather have formed the stem into a wide and pleasing gentle twist that narrows into the stalk that joins the earth.

“Mommy, please help me.” I look at the sky. I look at the pumpkin. I look at her. Bending my knees, I gather my strength and heave it into the wagon, now overflowing with our own cornucopia. Her hand meets mine inside the handle and together, we pull our bounty up the bumpy path.

After I pile our load onto the big scale and pay for the for it, I sit on an old wooden apple box. “Look at me,” Keira calls from inside the maze of hay for the children. “Take my picture!” She poses with a smile next to a faceless scarecrow. The cool air cupping my cheek is fragrant with the heady scents of dirt and hay, vines and vegetables. I take in a sip of cider pressed from freshly picked apples from the cup between my palms.

We make our way home and unload the pumpkins, eight of them onto our porch. “I can’t wait to carve them,” Keira exclaims and I feel myself flinch. A few weeks later, as Halloween draws near, we carry her favorite, the biggest one, from the porch into the kitchen and place it on the tarp I have laid over the wooden table. It is the eve of Halloween.

Keira climbs on top of the table next to it. “Please, Mommy, get the knife. I can’t wait for you to help me carve the pumpkin!” I think of my mother and her head. My chest tightens and my stomach hollows at the memory of the pumpkins carved by those surgeons showing off their prowess with the knives so many years ago. I force my attention to what is in front of me, not behind me. I pick up the knife.

“I want to see all the yucky, gory stuff inside!” I feel the ache for my mother as I look at my Keira’s expectant face. I force back the tears I feel forming before they can fall. They are not my daughter’s to catch. It takes several attempts before I can pierce the serrated blade completely through the dense orange flesh. Back and forth, I saw, working the knife in an arc around the thick stem until I complete the circle. Holding the stem for stability, I feel the top break free from the body. Gleefully, Keira grabs for the lid I have just created. She pulls it off and eagerly peers inside.

A few weeks later, I drive by the pumpkin patch and see a farmer riding his tractor back and forth over the slope, loosening and turning the remnant roots into the dark brown soil. The field, overflowing with abundance mere weeks ago, now lies fallow. Only a smattering of orange orbs remains. They lie scattered randomly, unchosen, across the deeply grooved rows of dirt.

The next day, I go by again and see some of those pumpkins arranged in a large C-shaped semi-circle, an arc at least fifty feet across that can easily be viewed from the road and even the sky. What is the farmer up to? What is he making with these leftovers and what is driving him to make this mysterious design in nature?

The following day, I am eager to drive by again to see if anything has changed. With Keira tucked in the backseat, I pull over and look. He has gone, leaving his work completed. An intentional, yet random act of beauty. What made the farmer do this, I wonder? Is it to lift people up whom he will never meet as they drive by? Is it for him? Is it for me? Is it for everyone?

“What’s that big circle of pumpkins in the dirt, Mommy?” Keira asks, as we climb out of the car and stand on the edge of the road to survey the scene. We huddle together in the November wind. The late sun rakes over us and the pumpkins glow in its light, a large warm golden-orange ring against the almost black earth.

Was it a whim, an act of pure fancy? Or, is this his way of taking what is leftover and transforming it into something new? Different, yet beautiful in its own unique way? Does he also struggle with trying to live with his wounds and losses as he toils out in the fields? I feel the grief rise from that fathomless place inside me and then the momentary surge of something vaguely familiar that I know I was born with, but have forgotten.

“What are those lines in the middle?” Keira points at the three rows of pumpkins radiating outward in three directions from the largest one in the center, until they touch the edge of the circle.

“It’s a symbol, a sign,” I explain, unable to pull my stare away, my breath at first halted, now slow and resonant.

“What does the sign mean, Mommy?”

“It stands for peace,” I whisper. “It means peace.”


After the article went up on Writing It Real, the author wrote this:

The comment that my mother made to me about having her head cut open like a pumpkin is something that has haunted me. When I read your prompt for the contest, it seemed like it was calling for me to take a deep dive into those feelings. I could not have predicted the connections and layers that would come to me as I wrote. I am also amazed by the visceral imprints that are made during traumatic events that hold the sharpness of detail as if no time has passed. Thank you again for your wonderful support. It is a vulnerable feeling to expose something so personal to the outside world. I have felt uplifted by the encouraging comments.











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Tender is the Harvest, A Winning Essay by Laurie McConnachie — 11 Comments

  1. Laurie,

    I have read your essay more than once. It simply invites the reader to admire and experience your story, and ultimately, your writing, one more time. I do not often think of the words “beauty” and “sadness” as synonymous. However, You write about a beautiful sadness in a way that is so real and compelling. Well done!

    With appreciation, Judy Kvinsland

  2. This was a gorgeous essay. I too lost my mother to cancer. I wasn’t as young as you but at the end it was in her brain and it was so sad. You did an amazing job of bringing the reader with you in your journey. Well done!

    • Thank you, Morgan.

      I am very sorry about the loss of your mother and that her brain was also impacted by cancer. When the brain is affected, I think it can bring its own particular kind of sadness.

      I greatly appreciate your encouraging comments about the essay. Thank you for reading it. It touches me to know that you felt like you were on the journey with me as you read it.

      Thank you!

  3. A much deserved winning essay, Laurie, beautifully written, bringing me to all the scenes, the heart, the shared emotions, the profound loss of a woman’s mother, and ultimately, the
    depth of connection between such a death and the newborn joy with a young daughter. (To say nothing of the remarkable sharp parallel with pumpkins carved).

    I look forward to reading your winning write, Nancy Lamb, as well as yours, Julie.

    • Nancy, thank you for your kind and thoughtful comments about my essay.

      It is very gratifying that you were touched by it and that you saw the layers and connections that revealed themselves to me as I wrote it.

      I feel like you understand what I was trying to express and that is very meaningful to me.

      Thank you!

  4. Okay, WOW! That was lyrical and magical and you brought me to an unbearably beautiful place of death and rebirth. I still have what feels like an apple in my throat. Well done Laurie.

    • Thank you, Julie!

      I was feeling lyrical energy when I wrote it, so it makes me happy that you felt that as you read it.

      It also uplifts me that you picked up on the “unbearable beautiful” aspects of the essay. I am struck by the juxtaposition of beauty and pain in the experience of life and I am so glad that it came through in the writing.

      By the way, I had a catch in my throat for much of the time I was writing it.

      Your comments are much appreciated!

    • Nancy, thank you for kind comments.

      I am so glad that the essay touched you and you found it evocative. It also encourages me that you think others will be able to relate to the moments I was trying to capture and make sense of through this form of expression.

      Thank you so much!

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